I think Sarah has got a good start to her research , I can tell she has really thought about her critical investigation and has an interesting hypothesis to research.
She has a good source of academic research , but I think she needs to add more quotes.
Learner Response : Do you think you have enough evidence to prove your hypothesis?
I could find some statistics on how the amount of reality tv has increased and the proportion of people that watch it. I would also talk about the impact it's had on society such as the negative effects the sterotypes that the genre has created (for example the impact on socio-economic class).
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